06/10/14
Feedback from class
Our in class exercise for today was to critique each others work in regards to style and FADPs
Pros:
Our peers liked our illustrative style, hero aesthetic and use of colour
Cons:
The choose your weapon concept was to negative and conflicted with the positivity fairtrade promoted.
I feel our audience didn't get what we were going for and the use of the word weapon was highlight it is a fight/serious issue, One comment was pro choose your weapon however and their suggestion was to work with it and emphasize the style.
From here we will experiment with other catch phrases tied to the game aesthetic. Alternatively we will trial more hero type visual language as that is what appealed most to our fellow students.
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