22nd September
Interim class discussion and feedback
Feedback before presentation:
Pros:
Likes illustration style
Colour of map draws you in
Like the use of stylised comic
Gets idea of culture
Likes spilling of coffee to form africa
Clean layout
Rustic
Natural and organic-earthy
Gets 'helping'
Likes use of boy
Cons:
Doesn't get fair trade from poster
Too much white
desaturate background colour
Confusion of message
Map has been done before
Could be a charity poster
No feeling of responsibility-no human presence
confused message- about poverty
Needs more coffee
After explanation/presentation
Feedback:
Refine colour palatte
explore hero idea-relates well to target audience
Needs to target nz audience
Bring emotional response into map idea
Play with comic and illustrative style- add, diagonal lines etc, image is too static
Use colour to high light
Likes juxtaposition of illustration and typography
Stronger response to boy-grabs attention
Infographic would work well with hero concept-people can see how they are making a difference
Highlight coffee event
Tim's feedback
Experiment with the scale of the superhero woman
emphasize coffee cup- direct spill from top of page
Add a date- ties to an event
Use colour as an indicator/for emphasize
What to take from the class
Definately explore hero concept. Bringin personable illustrations and tpography in comic style. Use coulr to highlight issues and draw in reader.
Show an obvious relation to coffee event, add date and relevant subject matter
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